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the woods are tired,
sleeping under snow from
the year before (they
forgot about the calendar
turning- nobody
watches clocks
under the trees)

once I walked here
when leaves were above
me, not below
worlds change when
the sky drifts slowly
to the ground, buried
under a hiker’s footsteps

it is only now
when I can see them-
later, I’ll come back
to watch them melting
it is only then
when I am turned on my feet
again. dizzily
I retreat, scared of
anything but summer.
©2008-2009 ~cynicalxpoet
:iconcynicalxpoet:

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Strings: This is for ElectroBaby's Year-Long contest of various paraphernalia. It be here: [link]

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:iconelectrobaby:
Thanks for entering! See you in Febuary!

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:iconcynicalxpoet:
No problem. Same to you ^^
:iconwolfcub25:
this ones pretty cool :)

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:blackrose::heart:Desiren: Rebirthing now, I wanna live for love. I wanna live for you and me for the first time now, I feel alive somehow!! Rebirthing now, I wanna live my life. I wanna give you everything for the first time now, I feel alive somehow!!
:iconcynicalxpoet:
Thank you... I should really revise it or something, though >.<
:iconwolfcub25:
nah, I like it how it is

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:blackrose::heart:Desiren: Rebirthing now, I wanna live for love. I wanna live for you and me for the first time now, I feel alive somehow!! Rebirthing now, I wanna live my life. I wanna give you everything for the first time now, I feel alive somehow!!
:iconwolfcub25:
:giggle: I really do like it......dont you??

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:blackrose::heart:Desiren: Rebirthing now, I wanna live for love. I wanna live for you and me for the first time now, I feel alive somehow!! Rebirthing now, I wanna live my life. I wanna give you everything for the first time now, I feel alive somehow!!
:iconiamphoenixmoth:
I really like the way you phrase things. That's what I definitely like about your poetry.
You have a way of putting things in your poetry that reminds me in a way of my favorite poet.

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Me(E): you are a dreamcrusher, Alex. A brilliant one, but a dreamcrusher.
A: haha
E: you are, sir. I should go dig up Langston Hughes and tell him that.
A: you should
E: "What happens to a dream deferred?" "It gets stomped on by Alex."
:iconcynicalxpoet:
Hmm... thank you very much. ^__^
Ah. Well, that's a high compliment.

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